Monday, May 05, 2008

Granola Prose


As much as he had hoped the granola would spark his creativity, it seemed to be in vain. A few minutes earlier, his fingers in paralysis over the keyboard, The Writer had decided upon a course of action guaranteed to banish even the most daunting case of writer's block.

"Protein!" He had bounded from the chair as if it was white-hot and scooted for the kitchen. "Protein and fiber!"

A moment later, armed with two packets of Mixed Berry Granola Clusters, The Writer stalked back into The Writing Lair, determined to release his angst, like a torrent, upon the empty page.

chomp chomp

"The dwarf ran into the swamp," he wrote. Pausing for another cluster, he looked over his work. Not Joyce, by any means, but at least something other than that damned blinking cursor was now on the page.

"The dwarf, hmmmm. Must be more descriptive."

"The small dwarf ran into the swamp."

"No, redundant."

"The tall dwarf ran into the swamp."

"Contradictory? Or maybe just tall for a dwarf? Will the reader understand my intent? Ah...!"

"The bearded dwarf ran into the swamp."

"Now I'm rolling. But why is the bearded dwarf running into the swamp? Restless Leg Syndrome? Hives? Perhaps being pursued by an angry dwarf mother-in-law? Again, redundant. Curses!"

A few moments of thought and chomping ensued, then...

"Having recently discovered that his pants were on fire, the bearded dwarf ran into the swamp."

The Writer appraised his work. "Now that's something of which even Joyce may have been proud. First the discovery, then the reaction. We have conflict, action and reaction, and (dare I say) the makings of a plot. Must expand on the swamp a bit, however. Must lure the reader into my setting."

"Having recently discovered that his pants were on fire, the bearded dwarf ran into the swamp, which was wet, dark, scary, full of slimy creatures, and about 15 miles southwest of Tallahassee."

"Takes care of that," The Writer said, infinitely pleased with himself. "Now if I can just keep the momentum rolling as I ratchet up the suspense and introduce the antagonist."

"The bearded dwarf, who was named Stubs, soon lost his way in the wet, dark, and scary swamp. Suddenly and without warning, there was a rustling sound that came from a nearby stand of bull rushes that was only about three feet away."

The Writer sat back and mopped his brow. "When this is made into a movie, it'll definitely be PG-13 for intense scenarios."

The reeds parted and the antagonist strolled into the open, startling Stubs into a fart.

"Who are you? What are you doing here? What is your connection to the story? Did you know that you're standing on quicksand?" Stubs demanded.

"My name is Tony and I am here to antagonize you. No, I did not realize that I'm standing on quicksand, but now that you have mentioned it, I shall move aside. Better?"

The Writer smirked. Not only was that some snappy dialogue right there, but he had almost summed up the antagonist in one quick paragraph. All that was left was to make the reader truly understand how dangerous this character was. There would definitely be a bidding war for this manuscript.

"Much," said Stubs. "You can see by my kind warning to you, the enemy, that I am the hero of this story. I stand for all that is right and good. You represent all the crappy qualities that exist in the world."

"For instance?"

"One year you spent the entire Christmas season telling children that Santa's home melted due to global warming. You married an Irish girl just so you could divorce her on Saint Patrick's Day."

"I also watch slasher movies so I can cheer for the killer," Tony interjected. "And I like rap music."

"See, you are truly evil," Stubs replied, "but I am here to put an end to your evil ways."

Tony laughed evilly. "Hevil hevil hevil. What are you going to do? Sic your beard on me?"

"Close," Stubs said. "Except I happen to know of something that makes you quiver in fear. Something that will make you helpless with terror, so that I may drag you to justice."

"Ha! There is no such thing."

"Ah, but there is," Stubs said, his calm maddening. "I shall..."

The Writer reached in vain for another handful of granola. What was this? How could he finish this piece without...phooey. He didn't need any multi-grain new age crap to make him write. He was a Writer, dammit, and nothing could stop him when he was in the zone!

The dwarf smirked and walked to... [delete, delete] "I shall have your head," Stubs declared. "You shall hang from the tallest yard arm in the jungle." [delete, delete] "My minions will cook you upon a spit and season you with cinnamon, with just a hint of basil." [delete, delete]

"Honey? Are you okay?"

The Writer looked up from the keyboard to find his wife standing in the doorway, a look of concern on her face. "What?"

"I heard you scream in agony. I thought something might be wrong."

"It's nothing," said The Writer, quickly mopping up his tears before they shorted out the laptop. "We're just...out of granola."

6 comments:

Stupid Blogger's Wifey said...

Oh, dear, said the wife, "I shall run right out and get some more granola for our little lair."
This is so funny I actually laughed out loud. I like the tall dwarf. It would scare the other dwarfs, or is that dwarves? hmmmmm....... Oh well, it would make them think he was possessed with an evil thing. They would be scared and he would have to live in the scary swamp to keep them from killing him.
Maybe I should be a writer.

Paul "FooDaddy" Brand said...

My favorite part?

My name is Tony, and I'm here to antagonize you.

When I was a fractious youth, my father would occasionally sic his beard on me.

"It's bristly, boy, and brooks no backsass," he would say. I remember that, and used it in a post earlier.

And that's what we Writers do; use material from our own experiences to create an immersive world that draws readers in.

TSB was once a bearded sarcastic dwarf in a swamp who became antagonized by a beard, one would assume, so he has cycled this into his writing. Brilliant.

Paul "FooDaddy" Brand said...

Aw, cuh-RAP! I meant to say "antagonized by a Tony," but I was too busy thinking about beards!

Although, it's funnier the way it is, albeit clumsy.

Dang no-editing-yer-comments...feh.

foodaddy's foodaddy said...

Adding a note of conspiracy at very little additonal cost: I'm Tony, and I've been sent here [by: Lucifer, Walt Disney, God, Moloch, the manager of the local Target] to antagonize you."

Curvy Cosmo girl (the girlfriend) said...

what is a Tony? I have wondered that... why is he here to antagonize me? or was that some one else? I am confused.... please write more. This is good, very funny, I want more. *pouts*

foodaddy's foodaddy said...

A Tony is a once-popular home-permanent preparation, I believe..